The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table represents the proportion of college students that
rate
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their university well in 2000, 2005 and 2010. All in all, the best
feedbacks
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feedback
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were
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given for the print resources which were present at school,
while
the least talked about services were the range of modules offered.
Although
,
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the building and teaching infrastructure had high ratings there were no changes in the proportion of scholars who gave feedback. Even though 77% of people had nice things to say about the learning facilities, it remained the same from 2000 , 2005 and 2010
also
because of
this
, the scorings for
range
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the range
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of modules offered fell
by
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from
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3% in 2010 to 27%. As it concerns electronic resources , a large percentage of students
at
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89 % in 2005 spoke in high regard and even though there were
less
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resources in 2010, the t was said to be
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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