The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table represents the proportion of college students that
rate
their university well in 2000, 2005 and 2010.
All in all, the best Wrong verb form
rated
feedbacks
Fix the agreement mistake
feedback
were
given for the print resources which were present at school, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
the least talked about services were the range of modules offered. Although
,
the building and teaching infrastructure had high ratings there were no changes in the proportion of scholars who gave feedback.
Even though 77% of people had nice things to say about the learning facilities, it remained the same from 2000 , 2005 and 2010 Remove the comma
apply
also
because of this
, the scorings for range
of modules offered fell Correct article usage
the range
by
3% in 2010 to 27%.
As it concerns electronic resources , a large percentage of students Change preposition
from
at
89 % in 2005 spoke in high regard and even though there were Change preposition
apply
less
resources in 2010, the t was said to beChange the quantifier
fewer
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