The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table and pie chart
shows
above Wrong verb form
shown
is
the data Correct subject-verb agreement
are
of
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on
Police
Correct article usage
the Police
Budget
&
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and allocation
Allocation
for 2017 & 2018
. The table shows Correct word choice
and 2018
Police
Correct article usage
the Police
budget
on
2017 & Change preposition
for
2018
and its sources, Correct word choice
and 2018
while
the pie chart present
the spending Change the verb form
presents
allocation
of the budget
.
According to
the table, there are 13.9m increases on
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in
police
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the police
budget
. The increases mainly came from National Government and Local Taxes funds. Both 2017
and 2018 Correct article usage
the 2017
budget
funding percentage shows similar results. In 2017, National
Government supported around 60% of the Correct article usage
the National
police
budget
that year, while
local taxes and other sources supported for
30% and 10% of the Change preposition
apply
budget
respectively. Meanwhile, for 2018
Correct article usage
the 2018
budget
, National Government funded around 56% of the whole yearly budget
, followed by local taxes who
contributed Correct pronoun usage
which
for
32% and other sources Change preposition
apply
who
contributed Correct pronoun usage
which
for
12% of the whole Change preposition
to
police
budget
in 2018
Meanwhile, the pie chart shows the allocation
of the police
budget
in 2017 and 2018. There are 3 main allocation
of the budget
, which is salaries for officers and staffs
, technology, and building and Fix the agreement mistake
staff
transports
. Both Fix the agreement mistake
transport
2017
and 2018 Correct article usage
the 2017
allocation
is
mainly for salaries, which Correct subject-verb agreement
are
taking
75% and 69% of the Wrong verb form
take
budget
. While
salaries
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salary
allocation
dropped, technology allocation
increased from 8% in 2017 and 14% in 2018. Building and transportation remain
the same in 2017 and 2018 with Wrong verb form
remained
17
% Correct article usage
a 17
allocation
from the yearly budget
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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