The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Bar Chart

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shows

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the changes

of

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the

employments

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employment

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in the United Kingdom between 1988-2012.

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, the charts

presents

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some

soaring

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in the

women

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percent

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and a normal

increasing

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in the

men

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, the

women

category, who is working

for

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a

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full-time gets

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from 19% to 26%;

Moreover

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then

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numbers

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higher from 4,482 to 7696;

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the

women

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part-time jobs

gets

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a

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unnoticed

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with 2%, In the other hand the

men

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a full-time jobs

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full-time jobs

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gradually goes down 53% in 1988 to 49% in 2012,

while

the

part time

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men

gets 1%

overall

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,In 2012,

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the

women

's category

increases

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sharply but with a small

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26%

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men

goes

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in

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second place in the developing but the biggest number 53%, the total shows the big step

the

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UK's population

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on

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working individually with

a numbers

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numbers

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from 23,839 to 29,600.