The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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is a map of Garldson and the possible locations of the supermarket (S) after construction.

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a railway will pass through the centre of the town where S2 will be situated, S1 will be in the countryside , Northwest of Garldson and in between major roads leading to Hindon to the North and Cransdin to the South . There would

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be a railway line behind S1. As for S1, it is expected to be situated away from residential areas in the countryside and with easier accessibility , if a train is taken from

this

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spot it would cross through S2 and connect to Cransdon which has a population of 29,000.

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, S2 will lie in the town centre where traffic is not a problem and it would be surrounded by many houses

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industries to the North and South of it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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149 words

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Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?