Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing ghings they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion

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Some people view to live there live by adventures and discoveries
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new places or trying to test new cuisine ,
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others prefer to live in the same situation they are familiar with
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. In my opinion . I completely with the various types of
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view
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. On the one hand; there are several merits to trying new things .
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, you will open your eyes and views of living.
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changing
in your personality which
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a competitive person ,
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life's struggles. and expansions
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mind for critical thinking .
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, obtain new experiences and
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challenging from
different people and folk.
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the community where you
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.
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, making a friend
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their culture and history which
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you to be
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person.
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,
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in
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zone where you are always doing the same things ,
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making
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you
your
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human like
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a robotet
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robotet
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machine.
evemore
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evermore
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auspicate
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in your,s family society ,
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and career
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life. The leader and
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say
( The
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that the
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success is to leave your comfort zone) All in all,In my
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to live a different
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life
lives
by trying to do something special that
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for you and your personality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • open-minded
  • adventurous
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • experiences
  • expand horizons
  • broaden perspective
  • variety
  • repetition
  • familiarity
  • novelty
  • curiosity
  • risk-taking
  • monotony
  • predictability
  • flexibility
  • late bloomer
  • conservative
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