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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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People
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 living in metropolitan
cities
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,
they
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apply
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may face more
problems
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 in their
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day to
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day-to-day
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day
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 lives. Government, they no need to encourage
people
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 to
move
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 to regional
towns
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. The upcoming phrases
explains
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 the statement. Why the
people
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move
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 to metropolitan
cities
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 from their regional
towns
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? There
are
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 some reasons to
move
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 from regional
towns
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 to large
cities
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 .
Firstly
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, Graduates
gets
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get
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 jobs easily
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compared
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comparted
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compared
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 to regional
towns
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 to large
cities
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,
comparitively
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comparatively
 they get more pay in large
cities
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 than in their regional
towns
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. Here we need to analyse the
problems
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 that
people
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facing
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face
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 in their daily lives. When they get more amount of salary compared to their regional places
parallelly
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apply
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their cost of living
also
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get
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gets
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 high.
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, the rent of
normal
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a normal
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 space holding
2BHK
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a 2BHK
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 house's rent in his hometown was 3000. The similar house
that is
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 in a coimbatore that costs 7000. In
another
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another word
other words
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words
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words,
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 we can eventually describe the traffic of a very busy road in a metropolitan city. Even we can't cross the road with minimum of 3-4 minutes. These
are
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 some
problems
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 that
peoples
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people
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facing
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face
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 in their
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day to
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day-to-day
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day
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 life in large
cities
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. We should not expect the government to encourage
people
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 to
move
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 to regional
towns
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. That's actually
people
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's wish to study or work in a large city to get more pay or to increase their standard of living. They need to solve their own
problems
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 by themselves. These
are
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 not the
problems
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 of the
people
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, these
are
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 the changes they have to adopt themselves.
Finally
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, we overviewed the
problems
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 that
are
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 faced by
people
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 that
are
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 not a problem these
are
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 the changes they have to adopt themselves.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, cities, problems, day, move, towns, are with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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