The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The design below shows the floor plan of a central library 20 years ago and how it looks nowadays.
At the first look, we see that tables were removed, and some of the rooms became bigger and have
a different shapes
. Correct the article-noun agreement
different shapes
a different shape
Use synonyms
Room
Correct article usage
The room
on
the left corner where Change preposition
in
CD’s
and videos used to be, became bigger and Change noun form
CDs
replace
Wrong verb form
replaced
to
Change preposition
with
children
books and storytelling events. On the right corner Change noun form
children's
enquiry
desk was removed and replaced by a cafe. Correct article usage
the enquiry
In the
same corner Change preposition
The
room
with children’s books became the lecture Use synonyms
room
and remained the same despite other ones. Use synonyms
Computer
Correct article usage
The computer
rooms
entry changed and it became Change the noun form
room
reading
Add an article
a reading
room
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the library remained the same except Linking Words
of
Change preposition
for
Correct article usage
the rooms
rooms
shape and Fix the agreement mistake
room
Correct your spelling
what was
whats
insideCorrect your spelling
what's
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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