The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of
beef
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,
lamb
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,
chicken
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and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004. In 1979
beef
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was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225
grams
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consumed per person per week.
Lamb
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and
chicken
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were eaten in similar quantities around 150
grams
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,
while
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much less fish was consumed, just over 50
grams
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.
However
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, during
this
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25-year
period
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period,
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the
consumption
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of
beef
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and
lamb
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fell dramatically to approximately 100
grams
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and 55
grams
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respectively. The
consumption
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of fish
also
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declined, but much less significantly to just below 50
grams
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, so
although
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it remained the least popular food,
consumption
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levels were the most stable. The
consumption
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of
chicken
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,
on the other hand
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, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of
lamb
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in 1980 and that of
beef
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in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250
grams
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per person per week.
Overall
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, the graph shows how the
consumption
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of
chicken
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increased dramatically
while
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the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, lamb, chicken, grams, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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