The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of
beef
,
lamb
,
chicken
and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004. In 1979
beef
was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225
grams
consumed per person per week.
Lamb
and
chicken
were eaten in similar quantities around 150
grams
,
while
much less fish was consumed, just over 50
grams
.
However
, during
this
25-year
period
Add a comma
period,
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the
consumption
of
beef
and
lamb
fell dramatically to approximately 100
grams
and 55
grams
respectively. The
consumption
of fish
also
declined, but much less significantly to just below 50
grams
, so
although
it remained the least popular food,
consumption
levels were the most stable. The
consumption
of
chicken
,
on the other hand
, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of
lamb
in 1980 and that of
beef
in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250
grams
per person per week.
Overall
, the graph shows how the
consumption
of
chicken
increased dramatically
while
the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.
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