The chart below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrest.

The chart below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrest.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and
women
who were arrested in five years ending in 1994,
whereas
the bar chart represents the reasons for most recent
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.
Overall
, it can be noted that the percentage of males who were arrested was higher than females by around four times.
Moreover
, public drinking was the main reason why both
them
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were arrested. Regarding the pie charts, it can be seen that the rate of
male
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who were caught was 32% compared to females which was 9%. By looking at the bar graph, it can be noted that a majority of
women
were caught because of public drinking which was over 35%,
while
the number of males was around 30%.
Similarly
, the rate of assault was higher among
women
than men at less than a fifth (18%) and more than 15% respectively.
On the other hand
, when it comes to
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driving, the rate of men
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arrested
at
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was 26%, which
two
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times
hinger
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higher
than
women
.
Likewise
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of order, theft and other reasons was higher among
man
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men
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compared to
women
. Around 8% of females and 4% of males did not give the answer for the reason why they were arrested.
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