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The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.

The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.
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this
 line chart
gievs
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gives
 us
informations
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information
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 about the
amount
 of
money
spend
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spent
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 on
books
 in four
country
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countries
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from 1995 to 2005 ,
overall
 it can be seen that people were more interested
to buy
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in buying
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books
 . refers to some
countrys
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countries
that
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such
 as Germany and
france
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France
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which
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 citizens were spent more
money
 rather than
tow
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two
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others country
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other countries
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, humans in
germany
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Germany
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started
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to
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spend
money
 on
books
 stood at 1995
by
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at
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 80
millions
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million
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 dollars
that
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which
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was
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were
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 a higher
levels
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level
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 of
total
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the total
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amount
 which followed by
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an
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increase
steadly
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steadily
steady
untill
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until
 1999 at 90
millions
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million
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 dollar
then
 during
teh
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the
 period 1999 to 2005
this
amount
 rose gradually
untill
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until
 below 100 one hundred
mellions
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millions
million
, that
amount
 for spending
money
 in
france
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France
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that started at
pver
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over
 50
millions
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million
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, over the period
incresed
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increased
gradualy
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gradually
. regarding 2
others
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other
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countrys
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countries
. in
italy
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Italy
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there was
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a steadly
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steadly
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steady
steadily
 increase in 1995
ot
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to
 60 million
then
 dropped to 50 million after 4 years
this
amount
was
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rose to over 60
millions
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million
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,
however
 in Australia which stood at 30
millions
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million
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thet
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there
 was a lower
amount
 of spending on
books
the
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followed by
jumped
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, money, books, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line chart
  • amount of money
  • paid on cars
  • China
  • Vietnam
  • Thailand
  • Indonesia
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • significant increase
  • highest amount
  • steady growth
  • lowest overall spending
  • started at
  • doubled
  • nearly
  • reached
  • exceeded
  • among
  • half a billion dollars
  • conclusion
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