The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.
The given line graph
illustrate
the expenditure on Change the verb form
illustrates
books
in four European countries from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, it is clear that
the amount of money which spended
on reading materials increased in the all given countries, over the whole time frame.
Looking more closely at Germany, where the expenditure on Correct your spelling
spent
books
was far exceeded than the others throughout the period, 80 millions
Change to singular
million
dollars
spended
Correct your spelling
spent
for
Change preposition
on
books
in the year 1995, and this
figure reached at
nearly 92 Change preposition
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
dollars
in 2005.
Turning to France and Italy, whose figures were so similar in
the Change preposition
at
beginnig
of the period at around 50 Correct your spelling
beginning
millions
Change to singular
million
dollars
, and
both of these figures increased. Correct word choice
apply
While
spended amount of money in France rise
constantly, between 1995 and 1999 Wrong verb form
rose
saw
a fluctuation in Italy Verb problem
there was
then
rose gradually until 2005.
In terms of Australia, which had the lowest expenditure on books
in 1995 at 30 million
dollars
, steadily increased by 1999 and represented in
40 Change preposition
apply
million
dollars
, then
remained stable at this
level in the following two years. From 2001 to 2005 witnessed a remarkable rising
and Replace the word
rise
this
figure rocketed from 40 million
dollars
to just above 70 million
dollars
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