do you think is consumption is important to a country. do you agree and disagree ?

There has been a recent debate about whether

consumption

is vital for the nation or not. Even though , it

is

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playing indispensable role

for

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fulfilling the essential needs of people in terms of survival

such

as food , clothes and

house

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.

However

,

this

essay delves into the dual nature of

consumption

,

explorinng

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exploring

its positive contribution

while

highlighting the the significant negative impacts. To commence with, as we know, nowadays there is a drastic increase in

number

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a number

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of people as compared to previous years, so the demands

has

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also

significantly increased among the folks in terms of fashionable clothes , luxurious homes and advanced gadgets.

Moreover

,

consumption

has been

proved

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extremely productive in the growth of

country's

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a country's

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economy.

The one

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stand out

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example would be Apple , Apple has been gaining popularity for its

advance

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gadgets

from

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in

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the

last

decade

to

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all over the world and it is the prominent resource for every nation to boost their financial growth and it leads to more job

oppurtunites

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opportunities

in the market.

On the other hand

,

consumption

has

also

bad impacts that cannot be neglected

for example

deforestation , global warming and pollution .

Firstly

,

high

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population is the main cause

for

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of

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rise

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the rise

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in pollution which

effects

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affects

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our atmosphere

which

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result

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in hazardous diseases.

Secondly

,

deforestaion

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deforestation

is

the

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another problematic cause for

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consumption

because of

high

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the high

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demands

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demand

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of

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for

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accomodations

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accommodation

, residence

area

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and industries as well .

Apart from

this

, these days lots of animals are getting slaughtered

bruttaly

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brutally

for the sake of their skin to make

such

fashionable clothes which is

quite

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pathetic way of living for humankind.

To conclude

,

consumption

is

inevitable

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the inevitable

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source for

the

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society in terms of living

standard

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standards

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.

However

, it has a dark side which can not be denied.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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should take

propmt

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prompt

action

about

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it

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by

educate

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people about it so that the utilization will be at

moderate

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a moderate

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level and that would be beneficial for

upcoming

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the upcoming

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generation.