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Some people think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it's more important to reward student who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music and good behaviour). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #schools #rewards #students #results #reward #student #success #sports #music #behaviour
Schools
 should be an environment where every
student
 feels included. Not every
student
 in school is academically gifted or
receive
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 straight A's.
some
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Some
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 of them are better at socializing, sports, art, and using their right brain. The way
schools
 reward their
students
 in both aspects can tell us so much
on
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about
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 how inclusive they are.
Academic
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Academics
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 plays
such
 a big role in
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the students
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students
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students'
student's
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 school
career
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careers
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.
Schools
 that give rewards for
high achieving
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high-achieving
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students
 can be a major motivation, but it's not that special. The stigma around a
scholars
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scholar's
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 academic score has always been positive. when a
student
 is able to do
math
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the math
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, science, and more complex subjects that
involves
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involve
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left brain
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left-brain
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 dominance they are viewed as smarter than their peers who are better at sports or art. They get rewards in different forms,
such
 as
praises
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praise
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, scores, and labels from society. Being book smart could
also
 lead to getting accepted into
top notch
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top-notch
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 universities,
scholarship
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 awards, and open them up to a wider range of career paths.
Although
 academic is important, some
students
 prefer gaining experience and excellence by using their creativity. Being good at
non academic
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non-academic
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 activities is often looked down upon. when in reality sometimes it takes so much more effort to be good at sports or art. It
require
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requires
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 physical dedication
as well as
 a strong mind.
Schools
 need to start viewing both as the same and reward
students
 for everything they achieve.
That is
 why
i
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I
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 think that it doesn't matter what subject
a
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apply
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someone is good at or how creative a
student
 can be. It matters
on
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apply
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how a school can include both successes and reward them equally. We should start supporting the future leaders of the world in every positive
aspects
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aspect
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 and not only
student
-scholars.
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