The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.
The table above illustrates data about the underground railway system in six major cities. The data includes the following cities: London, Paris,
Tokyo
, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. The main features are the date opened, kilometres of route, and passengers per
year
(in millions).
Overall
, the oldest underground railway is in London, and the newest one is in Los Angeles. Paris is the second oldest subway line. The largest metro system belongs to London and the shortest belongs to Kyoto, with 394 and 11 kilometres, respectively. Analysing the numbers, especially the number of passengers per
year
, it is possible to deduce that the underground system is more crowded in
Tokyo
, with 1927 people per
year
,
whereas
the most underused is in Kyoto, with 45 passengers each
year
. Washington DC and
Tokyo
have almost the same kilometres of route, despite the fact that
Tokyo
has about 13 times more users per
year
than Washington DC.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tokyo, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway systems
  • date opened
  • kilometres of route
  • passenger numbers per year
  • summarise
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • oldest
  • recent additions
  • route length
  • network
  • transport
  • massive
  • annually
  • comparatively shorter
  • follows closely behind
  • lowest number
  • second highest
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