The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

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diffrences

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differences

in

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of individuals

of

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65 years of age or above in Canada, Germany,

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UK for the years 1988, 2000 and 2030.

Overall

, the percentages of old age persons rose considerably over the course of the timeline in all three nations. The highest proportions will be marked for Germany,

whereas

the least ones shall be in the UK. Around 16.32 per

cent

of the people were aged 65 and above in Canada during the beginning of the time period,

after

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, the value rose by

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approximately

4 per

cent

by 2000.

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the

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of old age people are projected to reach 26.35 per

cent

by the end. In Germany, about 20.45 per

cent

of the total population accounted for

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geriatric ones,

following

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, the

portions

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of these persons

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considerably. By 2030, the percentage of concerned people shall rise to 30.42 per

cent

. In 1988, the proportion of individuals who were aged 65 and above

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14.23 per

cent

, in the next time period the value rose minimally and is predicted to clock a little more than 20 per

cent

by 2030.