The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region
The given bar graph illustrates the data about the population and wealth percentage among different regions globally.
Overall
, the highest population is seen in China whereas
Asia
Change noun form
Asia's
pacefic
has the lowest Correct your spelling
pacific
percent
. The global wealth distribution is at Replace the word
percentage
peak
in North America and least in India. China Correct pronoun usage
its peak
being
the highest among all regions constitutes approximately 22% Change the form of the verb
is
while
Asia
Change noun form
Asia's
pacefic
has the least Correct your spelling
pacific
of
5%. Change preposition
at
In contrast
to this
others
countries are between the average like India, Europe has 15%. Africa at 10% rest of the American regions Correct quantifier usage
other
accounts
Correct subject-verb agreement
account
below
10%.
The wealth distribution shows Change preposition
for below
high
rise in North America with 32% followed by a Add an article
a high
the high
decrease
trend with Europe at 30% and Rich Asia Change the verb form
decreasing
pacefic
at 25% Correct your spelling
pacific
whereas
the other countries account below
5%.Change preposition
for below
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