The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region
The given bar graph illustrates the data about the population and wealth percentage among different regions globally. 
Overall
, the highest population is seen in China
whereas
Asia
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Asia's
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pacefic
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pacific
has the lowest
percent
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. The global wealth distribution is at
peak
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its peak
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in North America and least in India. China
being
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the highest among all regions constitutes approximately 22%
while
Asia
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pacefic
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pacific
has the least
of
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5%.
In contrast
to
this
others
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countries are between the average like India, Europe has 15%. Africa at 10% rest of the American regions
accounts
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below
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10%. The wealth distribution shows
high
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rise in North America with 32% followed by a
decrease
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trend with Europe at 30% and Rich Asia
pacefic
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pacific
at 25%
whereas
the other countries account
below
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5%.
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