There is moral essentially nowadays for the Valuable countries of the earth to support the lowest countries develop in terms of feeding the nation, study and health care.
There is
moral
essentially nowadays for the Valuable Correct article usage
a moral
countries
of the earth to support the lowest countries
develop
in terms of feeding the nation, study and health care. One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is a lack of development special treatment,education and feeding. Now rich Wrong verb form
developed
countries
are beginning to figure it
out Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
issue in poor countries
.Personally
Add a comma
Personally,
i
tend to suppose that it will be the greatest way to support Change the capitalization
I
economic
low Change the word
economically
countries
. Firstly
it is well known that we live in 21
century,Replace the word
the 21st
century
of technology and medicine. What Correct article usage
a century
i
mean here is that Change the capitalization
I
technology
progress in poor Replace the word
technological
countries
can upgrade study capacity,if nation
are smart they Fix the agreement mistake
nations
had
enough possibilities to work prestige jobs.Wrong verb form
have
For
instance
Add a comma
instance,
i
really believe if people are educated,they can grow up their Change the capitalization
I
country
Change noun form
country's
economic
like ABC. An excellent case in Replace the word
economy
this
point is developing in all waysides,especially healthcare,feeding and education. On other
hand,it can Correct article usage
the other
also
be argued that two sides well and low developed
Add a hyphen
low-developed
countries
will have fascinating experiences and opportunities. That is
to say
great experience exchanges between different cultures will continue growth not only in Add a comma
say,
educational
way, Change the article
an educational
however
in medicine which has Correct word choice
but
Correct article usage
a directly
directly
link with lifestyle. Health care is vital for our Change the adverb
direct
society
qualities. Take for expound England and India which Change noun form
society's
has
a Wrong verb form
have
long term
relationship history. England in Add a hyphen
long-term
last
centuries Correct article usage
the last
give
them vast majority of power, like new technologies,new infrastructure and education in several Wrong verb form
given
sphere
. In conclusion,taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that for our common Change to a plural noun
spheres
future
it is necessary to assist each other despite all issues.Add a comma
future,
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
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