The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how renting books changed in a British local library over a period of 12 months.
It is observed that in the first month of the
year
, 10 books were rented. In the following 2 months, the index decreased by almost 2 times. Rents in April doubled compared to the previous month. The index stood between 14 and 15 until August, when observed remarkable
increase reaching 20 units. Correct article usage
a remarkable
Then
happened
Verb problem
there was
quick
drop to 8 units and after Correct article usage
a quick
slight
Correct article usage
a slight
rose
, it reached a low in the second half of the Replace the word
rise
year
showing 9 rents. A peak reached in last
month of the Correct article usage
the last
year
, standing at 21 books.
Overall
, the index stood stable in the middle of the year
. Besides
, they were at their highest in
the end of the given period Change the preposition
at
while
the weakest rents
figures could be observed in February.Change the noun form
rent
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