40.The table shows the percentage of government expenditure on health care in five countries in 2006 as well as the proportions of 24-30-year-olds working in medical services. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table displays information about the proportion of
government
spending used on health
maintenance and the percentage of individuals
from 24 to 30 who work
in medical Wrong verb form
worked
services
in 2006.
Overall
, the Italian government
is the one that use
the higher amount of their funds on Change the verb form
uses
health
care
, while
Poland was the one with lowest
spenders, but they had Correct article usage
the lowest
also
among the highest proportion of individuals
between 24 and 30 who work
in medical services
.
27% of government
expenditure are
used for Correct subject-verb agreement
is
health
care
in Italy, and 40% of Italian people have a job related to medical services
, which was the second highest overall
. The next country that spent
the most Wrong verb form
spends
in
Change preposition
on
health
care
is Spain, with 13%, and 34% of individuals
working in the area.
Iceland’s government
used 11% of their funds for health
care
, and 29% of individuals
work
in a
Remove the article
apply
medical related
Add a hyphen
medical-related
work
. Finland is the second country that spend
the least on Change the verb form
spends
health
care
with only a
9%, and only one-fourth of people from 24 to 30 Correct article usage
apply
work
in this
area. Finally
, Poland,
is the nation that Remove the comma
apply
waste
the least in Change the verb form
wastes
health
care
, with only 5%, but it had
the highest number of people working in medical Wrong verb form
has
services
, with 54%.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words government, health, individuals, work, services, care with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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