53.The diagrams below show three methods by which three companies choose to recruit new employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graphic illustrates the different ways in which three companies recruit new workers.
Overall
, it is a 4 to 6-stage and linear process. It begins with advertising or external recruitment followed by different activities and considerations taken by the companies, and finally
, people
are given the job
offer.
Company
A, has the shortest recruitment method, starting with uploading publicity within the company
, after that, the company
have a short list of applicants, and these people
are called for an interview, and finally
, some of them, get a job
offer. Company
B is advertised by the press, which will help them get a number of curriculums, they will consider each applicant, and choose those who are suitable for the job
position, so they have a shortlist. All people
on the shortlist will be interviewed and tested, and if they pass both processes, then
they will be given a job
offer.
Company
C gets the applicant list from external recruitment, this
can be from advertisements by agents or research by headhunters. The company
will directly get a short list of the best applicants, these people
will be called for an interview and the ones that fit the best will get the job
position.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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