The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average monthly
temperatures
in three major cities (Paris, Dubai, and Sydney) measured in Celsius.
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Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
temperatures
in Paris and Dubai gradually increase until August, after which they decrease. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Sydney experiences a temperature decrease at the beginning of the Linking Words
year
and a slight increase in July, continuing through to the end of the Use synonyms
year
.
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January
temperature in Dubai started at around 18 Use synonyms
degrees
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then
peaked at 36 Linking Words
degrees
in August, making it the hottest of Use synonyms
three
countries before falling to 21 Correct article usage
the three
degrees
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at the end
of the Linking Words
year
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Similarly
, Linking Words
temperatures
in Paris, which began at 5 Use synonyms
degrees
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January
, the coldest among the three countries, rose to 20 Use synonyms
degrees
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then
gradually decreased to 5 Linking Words
degrees
again in December.
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On the other hand
, Sydney was the hottest in Linking Words
January
, at approximately 24 Use synonyms
degrees
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temperatures
slowly decreased to 13 Use synonyms
degrees
in July and Use synonyms
then
returned to around the same temperature in Linking Words
January
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at the end
of the Linking Words
year
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures, year, january, degrees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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