The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average monthly
temperatures
in three major cities (Paris, Dubai, and Sydney) measured in Celsius.
Overall
, it can be seen that temperatures
in Paris and Dubai gradually increase until August, after which they decrease. In contrast
, Sydney experiences a temperature decrease at the beginning of the year
and a slight increase in July, continuing through to the end of the year
.
The January
temperature in Dubai started at around 18 degrees
and then
peaked at 36 degrees
in August, making it the hottest of three
countries before falling to 21 Correct article usage
the three
degrees
at the end
of the year
. Similarly
, temperatures
in Paris, which began at 5 degrees
in January
, the coldest among the three countries, rose to 20 degrees
and then
gradually decreased to 5 degrees
again in December.
On the other hand
, Sydney was the hottest in January
, at approximately 24 degrees
. After that, temperatures
slowly decreased to 13 degrees
in July and then
returned to around the same temperature in January
at the end
of the year
.Submitted by Kotchamon.jk on
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