The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The
graph
below illustrates the
number
of
people
that use three different types of transportation in the UK from 1970 to 2030. overview, the
car
was the most used transportation in 1970 and predictably more citizens in the UK to use the
car
to travel in 2030. The
bus
was the second favourite transport method but between 2010 to 2020, the train started to gain more attention and eventually, in 2030, it is the second most picked transport to travel. In 1970, 2
million
, 4
million
, and 5
million
people
picked train,
bus
, and
car
respectively as their main options
reach
Fix the infinitive
to reach
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their destinations. In a 10-year period, three graphs showed stability and starting from 1980,
car
users rose rapidly and by 2000 it had reached 7
million
users.
Then
from 2000 to 2010, the
graph
is stable and eventually started to slowly rise until it is predicted that an estimated 9
million
cars
people
commute using
the
Correct article usage
a
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vehicle. For buses, starting from 1980, the
graph
has shown a decline in the
number
of passengers and approximately only 2
million
people
that commute by
bus
.
This
is the lowest point for commuters during the 30-year period. In 2000, the train had gained around 3
million
passengers every day and that
number
was the same until 2010. From there, the
number
keep
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keeps
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growing fast
at
Change preposition
to
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the point it has surpassed the
bus
's
graph
and
keeps
Wrong verb form
will keep
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increasing to around 5
million
users in 2030.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, people, car, bus, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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