The chart and table below give information about population figures in japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart and
table
illustrate the
number of
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population in Japan by two features millions and percentages from 1950 TO 2055.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the population made an upgrade over the year 1950 until 2005
then
began to dwindle.
whereas
the
table
shows an increase in the years by 16 per cent. Glacing at the chart and
table
reveals that, the population started to rise from the year 1950 by 84.1 million
while
in the
table
only 4.1 million
in addition
the figures begin to rise hard because the fertility rates go up to achieve a high number of humans at 127.8 million in comparison with the
table
it was 25.7 M with a 20.0 cent .
Moreover
, the ages fluctuated in the years 2035 and 2055, between 37.3 and 36.5 with a per cent of 34.0 and 41.0.
Therefore
, the number was low in the chart exactly in the year 2035.
However
, the amount of habitats dropped drastically in 2055 at 89.9 m.
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