People's shopping habits depend on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Who is in a hectic schedule, mostly like a thing is shopping. There is an argument
people's
shopping Correct word choice
that people's
habits
depend on their age other than any Use synonyms
factors
. In Correct word choice
other factors
this
essay, I would like to say my choice, Which is Linking Words
agree
without Fix the infinitive
to agree
disagree
.
To commence with, everybody who Wrong verb form
disagreeing
are
living on Change the verb form
is
this
planet mostly Linking Words
prefer
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prefers
thing is
buying whether any other Verb problem
apply
habits
like eating,sleeping,traveling and collecting items. Use synonyms
Moreover
, if we look at, Why Linking Words
this
is more famous, We have various answers for Linking Words
this
. Linking Words
Because online
shopping,home delivery system and a plethora of collection attract Correct word choice
Online
customers
mind. As an adult woman, If I can Change noun form
customers'
customer's
control
my mind to buy or not our kids do not Use synonyms
control
it. They can not Use synonyms
control
it because they Use synonyms
have
not great thinking Add a missing verb
do have
pattern
like adults.Kids always go shopping with their parents and can Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
control
them after Use synonyms
checked
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checking
the
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their
wallet
. If mothers do not have money, kid's ideas do not bloom.
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wallets
been became
young, adults and old we can Wrong verb form
become
get
decisions. After Verb problem
make
the
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apply
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someone Add a comma
years,
choose
their career and Change the verb form
chooses
they
can get Correct pronoun usage
apply
monthly
payment. So Add an article
a monthly
the monthly
that
the most preferable age Correct word choice
apply
most
of them Add a missing verb
is most
addict
to shopping. In that time period Replace the word
addicted
youngers
hearts Replace the word
young people's
stole
by some major items. For Wrong verb form
were stolen
an
instance, they love Correct article usage
apply
to
mobiles, clothes, Change preposition
apply
jewelleries
, watches and perfumes. Not only that but Change the wording
jewellery
pieces of jewellery
also
some technical instruments which help to their day to day Linking Words
choes
. Correct your spelling
chores
shoes
Although
it is not a mistake Linking Words
of
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for
new
generation, it Correct article usage
the new
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also
a marketing trick.By comparing Add a missing verb
is also
another
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another habit
other habits
habits
, most of Use synonyms
that
can not Correct pronoun usage
them
show
to others. Wrong verb form
be shown
Therefor
, buying is more Correct your spelling
Therefore
demand
in Change preposition
in demand
this
era among the youngest.
In conclusion, We can select our choices, even a habit and; Linking Words
habits
are different one Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
apply
one
by the way, shopping is one of them and most of the youngest love online or go to shops and buy varieties.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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task response
Ensure that you address all parts of the prompt and clearly state your position and reasons.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a clear and coherent manner, using appropriate paragraphing and linking devices.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more precise and sophisticated words and phrases to express your ideas.
grammatical range
Work on improving your sentence structure and grammar to avoid errors and enhance clarity.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite