The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first line graph illustrates how many people
travelling
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by train during a 9-year
period
from 2000 to 2009,
while
the other shows the proportion of punctual
trains
.
Overall
, there were many significant changes during
this
period
. Both the number of train
travelers
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and the rate of
trains
running on time as opposed to the target pretty dramatically increased. It can be clearly observed from the first chart that there were around 40
billion
commuters using
trains
in the year 2000.
Then
there was a slight increase to nearly 45
billion
in the number of people going by train in 2002, which was followed by the lowest point of roughly 35
billion
one year later. After two years, it reached a peak of approximately 50
billion
travelers
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before decreasing
of
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five
billion
in the
last
year. In terms of the other graph, 92% of
trains
running on time in comparison with their target. After the following four years, it substantially rose to 96%, but later
this
rate considerably fell
of
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4%, which was the same as it was in 2000.
However
,
this
figure of
trains
being punctual saw a significant growth to 97%, which was the peak during
this
period
, before levelling off
in
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the end of the
period
of time.
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