The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. The second graph shows the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line graph illustrates how many people
travelling
by train during a 9-year Wrong verb form
travelled
period
from 2000 to 2009, while
the other shows the proportion of punctual trains
.
Overall
, there were many significant changes during this
period
. Both the number of train travelers
and the rate of Change the spelling
travellers
trains
running on time as opposed to the target pretty dramatically increased.
It can be clearly observed from the first chart that there were around 40 billion
commuters using trains
in the year 2000. Then
there was a slight increase to nearly 45 billion
in the number of people going by train in 2002, which was followed by the lowest point of roughly 35 billion
one year later. After two years, it reached a peak of approximately 50 billion
travelers
before decreasing Change the spelling
travellers
of
five Change preposition
to
billion
in the last
year.
In terms of the other graph, 92% of trains
running on time in comparison with their target. After the following four years, it substantially rose to 96%, but later this
rate considerably fell of
4%, which was the same as it was in 2000. Change preposition
to
However
, this
figure of trains
being punctual saw a significant growth to 97%, which was the peak during this
period
, before levelling off in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
period
of time.Submitted by luongduy30411996 on
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