Write a letter You recently visited the zoological park and had an uncanny experience , as the man died by falling in the tiger enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point, but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors. Write an email to director of Zoological park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following. 1)Give a description of the incident 2)Complain about the short fencing 3)Show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you about the unfortunate incident that occurred at Nehru Zoological Park.
Firstly
,I visited Nehru Zoological Park
last
Sunday, I was very excited to see all the animals.
Secondly
,I was very curious to see the Tigers ,so I went to see the
tiger
's enclosure.
Moreover
,As it was a holiday the tigers' place was crowded heavily. In front of my eyes , a man fell into the
tiger
's enclosure . I was in a helpless situation , I had called immediately and informed zoo security but by the time they had reached the place , the
tiger
had killed him in hunger and ate him. I believe
this
is
due to
a short fencing around the
tiger
enclosure. If the fencing had been higher in length ,
this
incident would not have happened. The zoo management was careless about fencing and least bothered about public safety. I urge you to arrange a long fencing and possibly put water around the
tiger
place so that, it helps in visitors safety. I would appreciate your immediate attention on
this
matter. Yours sincerely, James.
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