You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Madam, I am writing regarding joining your gym as I just moved to

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city and your fitness centre is just down one road. I am a working professional in a construction company. I have a few questions regarding the joining that I would like to ask you.

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, could you please briefly describe to me the type of memberships that are currently available at your fitness centre with respective prices?

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, I have been in strength training for the past 6 years and I mainly use weights, some heavy machines, a swimming pool, and a sauna to relax.

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, do let me know if there are any extra activities available for me

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as indoor sports like football, badminton, or tennis.

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, could you tell me what is the joining process? As I told you I am really excited to join your gym and would love to start next week. Appreciate your time and looking forward to hearing back from you! Yours Faithfully, Grishma Sadan

grishma1908Fri Nov 03 2023

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lexical resource

Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource.

grammatical range

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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