The map below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The map demonstrates the development that happened to Willington
town
in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the town
had
changed tremendously. From a Wrong verb form
has
land
that only consisted of a vast land
to a busting rural area as public infrastructure has been built while
the river remained unchanged.
Looking the
map for more detail, at the starting point which was 1780, Willington only had 100 homes and 4 lands for Change preposition
at the
agriculture
purposes. Replace the word
agricultural
Consequently
, there had been an uprise in population as number
of housing had Change the article
the number
been
doubled for the Unnecessary verb
apply
last
nearly a decade. Moreover
, those number
had jumped nearly triple the amount from just 200 home ownerships to 500.
On top of that, many public buildings had Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
also
joined with the population's blooming trends as well
when the Rephrase
apply
town
began as a farming-focused town
to a reforming residential town
for future comers to live. in 1860 the farming land
had been cut down 2 lands and connected the county with a road to the outside and eventually by 2000 the land
of Willington was busting with other public infrastructures such
as schools with many sports fields, shops
and the introduction of wetland for birds. Correct word choice
and shops
Moreover
, those types of buildings were built above the area that used to be covered by woods
.Fix the agreement mistake
wood
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