You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

A glance at

pie

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the pie

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charts provided reveals a sharp comparison of the ratio of

time

working that adolescents used to distinction activities in a particular nation, measured in

percent

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per cent

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, between 1958 and 2008.

Overall

, people spent

one -third

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one-third of

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time

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the time

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, in both 1958 and 2008,

to

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working

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work

and

sleep

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sleeping

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. In 1958, overwhelming proportions of the percentage of

time

working belonged to working and sleeping

with

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at

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33% and 32%, closely followed by going out( with friends or family) with 19%.

Meanwhile

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Meanwhile,

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the third

ranks

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rank

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were

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was

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accounted for by three activities,

such

as relaxing at home, other interests and travel to

work

, with under 10%. After half a century,

although

the ratio of

time

working of both working and sleeping still remained the first rank, they had obvious alterations.

While

the percentage of a day, that people consumed to

work

, exponentially increased to 42%, that of sleeping experienced a deterioration to 25%.

At the end

of the scale, the least significant proportions made up to other interests or playing sports, travel to

work

and going out with 8%, 8% and 6% respectively. Meanwhile, the percentage of a day that adults used to relax at home accelerated to 13%.