Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both th

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have different opinions about whether to learn new

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in addition

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or just stick to

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and dedicate all their time to them.

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focusing on

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is of great importance, I personally believe that learning new skills could be really beneficial for

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. On the one hand, materials which pupils learn at

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can help them improve their knowledge and broaden their

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, lessons like mathematics and physics could be

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how to think about solving problems.

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,

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like science could assist individuals in real life when dealing with various problems.

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concentrating on

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materials could have other advantages too, If pupils get good marks at

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, it could improve their self-confidence and

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them to make more efforts and make progress.

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, it could assist their career prospect in the future.

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, it is vital for science seekers to pay attention to the

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they learn at

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.

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, learning other skills

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of the

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could have various advantages.

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can dedicate some of their free time to

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more knowledge in various sectors like

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and software. Since technology has been an inevitable part of our lives, it is crucial for individuals to be compatible with technology and gain as much

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information as they

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. Other than that, they can learn one or two of the live languages which is appealing for them.

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, all these acquired skills would help them in future to be a more successful person.

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,

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should be motivated

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various

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besides

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to improve their

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careers. In conclusion, I can understand that it is important for

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to get good marks

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, but it seems to me that learning novel

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could make them more productive in future life