The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.

The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people

liked, taken in 2005.
The bar graph shows information from a survey regarding the most popular varieties of living spaces in three English towns in 2005, measured in percentage.
Overall
,
flats
dominated the choices made by citizens of London and Oxford,
while
detached
houses
were the most favourite ones in Cambridge. Nearly 60% of the population in London chose
flats
, followed by semi-separate and terraced
houses
with slightly different portions each below 20%, and detached
houses
became the least common option with a less than 10% result.
On the contrary
, the percentages of every type of living place in Oxford were distributed more evenly with no category surpassing the number of 30%.
However
, there was a mere difference with
flats
topping the charts continued by semi-detached and detached
houses
afterwards,
while
the terraced kinds became the only result under 20%.
On the other hand
, Cambridge was the only place where
separate
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homes' percentage exceeded the others by reaching approximately 35%.
Additionally
, the half-detached
houses
came second with 25% before
flats
, which were 5% lower, and terraced
houses
finished
last
with an under 20% result.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words flats, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • illustrates
  • result
  • British
  • types of houses
  • people
  • liked
  • taken
  • 2005
  • chart
  • popular
  • least popular
  • description
  • discussion
  • summary
  • key findings
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