In recent years, the number of children participating in sports and other physical activities has decreased. Identify some of the resulting problems and state ways to address them.

Younger
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generation, nowadays shows less interest in
sports
. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will be discussing the problems responsible for
this
. To commence with , the first problem which
children
faces
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is
due to
more use of smartphones. Nowadays, technology
have
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adversely affected the mental health of kids. They prefer playing
games
in
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on
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smartphones rather than playing
outdoor
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.
For example
, these days
children
after returning from
school
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a school
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play
games
on
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,
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and playstations
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playstations
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PlayStations
,
whereas
, earlier in
old
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the old
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days we
use
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to play
games
like cricket , football and other physical
games
after returning from school. So, these technologies have
decresed
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decreased
the interest
of
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in
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playing
sports
in
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with
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children
.
Furthermore
,
Junk
food is
also
one
such
problem.
Junk
foods are responsible for increasing obesity in a child. They are so addictive that they badly affect
children
's health both physically
as well as
mentally.
Such
types of food have ingredients responsible for instability and
reduces
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one's ability to think for their physical fitness.
For instance
, a child who takes a healthy diet is more conscious about fitness as compared to a child who prefers
junk
food over a healthy diet.
Hence
,
Unhealthy
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diet is
also
decreasing
thenumber
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the number
of
children
participating in
sports
.
According to
me, Motivation can play a key role in increasing interest
for
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in
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sports
in
children
. Motivation can be anything like getting inspired
from
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by
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athletes or getting motivated
from
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colleagues. In conclusion, Smartphones and
Junk
Foods
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Food
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are the major problems responsible for decreasing the number of
children
taking part in
sports
.
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