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The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. * vehicles that use both fuel and electricity

The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. * vehicles that use both fuel and electricity
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The bar chart illustrates the world hybrid vehicle
sales
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 from the
year
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 2006 to 2009. The
sales
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 data consists of the
sales
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 of two countries Japan and,
USthe
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the
 US and a blend of other countries.
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 the data demonstrates that the
sales
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 of the US are higher from the
year
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 2006 but Japan surpassed in the
year
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 2009. In 2006, the United Nations reached a higher level of
sales
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 having 250,000 which is four times higher than Japan and other nations only had 50,000
sales
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.
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, the
sales
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 of other nations steadily increased from the very next
year
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. During the
year
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 2007 US reported the biggest
sales
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 having 350,000 surprisingly US collected significant turnover from the business. The US continues its
sales
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 performance from 2006 to 2009 not below 250000 each
year
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. The growth of Japanese
sales
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 was outstanding during the
year
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 2009. The data demonstrates that the number of
sales
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 has rapidly crossed 300,000 putting the US in second place. It is remarkable that the sale of hybrid vehicles
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 increasing its
sales
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 all over the world, the figure for other countries'
sales
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 shows that the vehicles are gaining immense popularity among users.

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