the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first pie chart illustrates what an average Australian family
used
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uses
energy
for, and the second pie chart indicates Use synonyms
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proportion
of produced gas Add an article
the proportion
due to
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consumption
of Correct article usage
the consumption
energy
.
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Overall
, an average Australian family Linking Words
used
more than Wrong verb form
uses
two-third
of the Correct your spelling
two-thirds
energy
for heating and water heating, and around half of the emitted greenhouse gases Use synonyms
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are
energy
uses.
Australians consumed the highest Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
energy
for heating, and the second Use synonyms
high
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highest
proportion
for water heating, 42% and 30% respectively. Interestingly, despite being the main purpose of Use synonyms
energy
use, the percentage of gas emitted Use synonyms
as a result
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energy
consumption for heating was the third Use synonyms
large
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largest
proportion
, after 32% for water heating and 28% for other appliances.
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lowest
amount of Add an article
the lowest
energy
was used for cooling, lighting, and refrigeration with 2%, 4%, and 7% respectively. Among the Use synonyms
last
three, Linking Words
energy
used for refrigeration was the most pollutive, with Use synonyms
the
14% share of emitted gas, Correct article usage
a
while
the pollution share for cooling and lightning Linking Words
where
3% and 8% respectively.Correct your spelling
were
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