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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email, •recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn • explain how your friend could learn this sport • suggest that you both learn this sport together

#friend #lives #town #advice #sport #email #•recommend
Dear Jai, Hope you are in
best
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 of health. I believe you enjoy the beauty and culture of our town. As you asked me to suggest a new sport which you can easily learn in our locality,
So
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I am writing
this
 letter and hope you like my suggestion.
Firstly
, our residential area is popular
in
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for
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 sports as
number
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a number
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 of events are organized every month. There are separate stadiums for soccer,
cricket
, badminton
court
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courts
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 and swimming pools.
According to
 me, you will learn
cricket
 because it is
very
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 interesting game which you enjoy the most.
Besides
, it is a good way to do exercise and make our body in perfect shape.
Moreover
, you can join the youth sports academy which is totally free and provides training to play
cricket
.
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 to it, you can select your own schedule as you studied in a college so it is good for you to pick a slot in the evening.
Furthermore
, it is easy for you to meet new players and you can participate in
locality
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sport
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 events once you get trained
how
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 to play
cricket
. Especially, you will be happy to hear that I am
also
 willing to learn
this
 sport as I really enjoy watching
cricket
 on
the
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television.
Therefore
, I feel we will start practising
this
 game from next Monday. I believe you agree with me and I am waiting for your response. Best regards, LS
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