It is clear that the number of males who prefer to have scientific education is much higher in comparison with the females who choose similar study. There are two main reasons of dominating man on this field and two appropriate decisions which eliminate this gap between boys and girls

It is clear that

the number of males who prefer to have

scientific

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education is much higher in comparison with the females who choose similar

study

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. There are two main reasons

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dominating

man

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on

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this

field and two appropriate decisions which eliminate

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gap between boys and

girls

.

Firstly

, society in many countries

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girls

to choose

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traditional way of life to be the best wife and mother rather than to build a career.

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predictable way of life for

girls

doesn’t belong to the scientific world. On top of that,

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simple statistic says that

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for

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women

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to be a successful mammy is much more realistic than to be a notable scientist.

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, there are

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number of stereotypes about females’ inability to the precise subjects as math or physics.

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, pavement to the research career is much harder for

girls

than for boys.

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all

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reasons

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majority of women reject any opportunity to

study

science. There are two main solutions

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this

issue. First of all, families don’t need to support the idea that science is only for males. Obviously, if a girl shows interest

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some

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activity it must be stimulated by

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and school.

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, the tradition

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gender presents

likewise

dolls for

girls

and chemistry for boys must be eliminated. Clearly,

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from

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childhood and the parenting determines future of people.

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changes will bring

girls

to

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consciousness

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choice of profession and the scientific job can be represented among them widely.

To sum up

, stereotypes and traditional parenting based on the

famer

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human experience block the opportunities for

girls

to be scientists.

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reasons can

be overcame

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by

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study

and correct relation to

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women

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professions.