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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.
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The table illustrates that the Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
 and
bananas
comsummed
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consumed
by people from different five European countries in the years
of
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1999 and 2004. In 1999, people from Switzerland preferred buying
coffee
 and
this
 trend
also
 improved in 2004.
While
 in Sweden,
coffee
 was not popular in both two years. In 2004,
coffee
 became the most popular
things
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thing
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 among people from the UK.
However
, it
just be
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sold
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just
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1.5 million
of
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euros in 1999, which increased rapidly during these years. The consumption of
coffee
 in
other
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the other
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 four countries
raised
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rose
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lightly
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of
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to
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 3 million. In 1999 and 2004,
Switzerland
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Switzerland's
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civics
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civic
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favauriate
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favourite
 thing
is
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was
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bananas
, the sales of
bananas
 increased
speedly
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speed
speedily
 from 15 to 47.
However
, the consumption of
bananas
 in Sweden and Denmark decreased
gentally
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gently
, up to 0.9 and 1
recpectively
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respectively
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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