The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.
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The table illustrates that the Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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comsummed
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consumed

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by people from different five European countries in the years
of
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1999 and 2004. In 1999, people from Switzerland preferred buying
coffee
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and
this
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trend
also
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improved in 2004.
While
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in Sweden,
coffee
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was not popular in both two years. In 2004,
coffee
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became the most popular
things
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thing

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among people from the UK.
However
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, it
just be
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sold
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just

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1.5 million
of
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apply

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euros in 1999, which increased rapidly during these years. The consumption of
coffee
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in
other
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the other

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four countries
raised
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rose

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lightly
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slightly

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of
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to

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3 million. In 1999 and 2004,
Switzerland
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Switzerland's

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civics
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civic

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favauriate
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favourite

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thing
is
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was

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bananas
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, the sales of
bananas
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increased
speedly
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speed
speedily

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from 15 to 47.
However
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, the consumption of
bananas
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in Sweden and Denmark decreased
gentally
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gently

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, up to 0.9 and 1
recpectively
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respectively

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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