The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.
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The table illustrates that the Fairtrade-labelled 1.5 million
coffee
and bananas
comsummed
by people from different five European countries in the years Correct your spelling
consumed
of
1999 and 2004.
In 1999, people from Switzerland preferred buying Change preposition
apply
coffee
and this
trend also
improved in 2004. While
in Sweden, coffee
was not popular in both two years. In 2004, coffee
became the most popular things
among people from the UK. Fix the agreement mistake
thing
However
, it just be
soldVerb problem
apply
Rephrase
just
of
euros in 1999, which increased rapidly during these years. The consumption of Change preposition
apply
coffee
in other
four countries Correct article usage
the other
raised
Verb problem
rose
lightly
Replace the word
slightly
of
3 million.
In 1999 and 2004, Change preposition
to
Switzerland
Change noun form
Switzerland's
civics
Correct your spelling
civic
favauriate
thing Correct your spelling
favourite
is
Wrong verb form
was
bananas
, the sales of bananas
increased speedly
from 15 to 47. Correct your spelling
speed
speedily
However
, the consumption of bananas
in Sweden and Denmark decreased gentally
, up to 0.9 and 1 Correct your spelling
gently
recpectively
.Correct your spelling
respectively
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