The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The report uses a line chart that illustrates the changes in the amount of consumption of fish and various types of meat in a European nation from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
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, except for
chicken
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, all factors decreased in 2004.
Chicken
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, beef, and lamb witnessed the largest fluctuations,
while
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fish were relatively stable until the end of the survey. Fish had the lowest number in 1979 with just over 50
grams
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per person per week, and
this
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slightly went down and stabilized with around 50
grams
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in 2004.
In contrast
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, beef had the highest data at the beginning, with above 200
grams
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.
However
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, it steadily dropped by 100
grams
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in 1984 and continued to decrease sharply to above 100
grams
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in 2004.
Chicken
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and lamb had a similarity in the figures at the starting point, with approximately 150
grams
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.
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, in the next period, their trend reversed. With the wildest fluctuations,
chicken
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reached the first rank with 250
grams
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in 2004. Meanwhile, lamb plummeted significantly to the third rank with approximately 75
grams
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.
This
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data was one-third when compared to the
chicken
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chicken, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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