The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate significant changes in the seaside municipality of Seaville, over a thirty-year period, from 1980 to 2010.

Overall

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, the village developed substantially from a holiday settlement to a permanent town over the 30-year period.

Likewise

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, infrastructure and amenities increased,

along with

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the area's capacity to provide for tourists. In 1980, Seaville was tiny, attracting only a few tourists, who were accommodated in cottages or a small hotel.

In contrast

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, the East

Bank

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was unspoilt. To the east of the cabins, was a marsh, and there was woodland to the north. Regarding recreation,

besides

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the beach, the township only offered a tearoom.

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, the village had grown dramatically by 2010. Retirement villages had been built to the west of the main road. The marsh had been drained and the chalets demolished to construct houses. To cater for tourists, both a new high-rise hotel and holiday huts on the East

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were constructed. The woodlands had been cleared and supplanted by a golf course.

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, a boat club had been built on the west

bank

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of the river. New infrastructure was created to access the East

Bank

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On the other hand

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, the town had preserved the original hotel.

To sum up

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, Seaville's geographical landscape had changed and expanded exponentially over the given timeframe.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bank with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

213 words

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The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.

Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.