the diagram below shows information about carbon dioxide emissions for popular private jets. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given table provides information about the emission of carbon dioxide (in gallons of
fuel
, pounds
of CO2, and the cost of flight) from popular private jets. Overall
, Gulfstream
III uses the highest gallons of fuel
and has the highest pounds
of CO2, while
Cessna
CJ II is the lowest. In addition
, there are three levels of flight prices of aircrafts
.
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aircraft
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with
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with,
Gulfstream
has the highest consumption of fuel
with 488 and has the highest pounds
(lbs) of CO2 at 10,078. Meanwhile, Cessna
CJ II uses the lowest energy with 136 and produces the lowest of CO2 which is 3,002.
Next,
Gulfstream
550 is in the
second place Correct article usage
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of
the consumption of Change preposition
in
fuel
with 378. Then
, Challenger 605, Learjet 60, and Cessna
Citation XLS consume between 200 and 300 gallons of fuel
, followed by Hawker
800XP (188), Hawker
400XP (188) and Beechjet 400 (182).
In terms of pounds
(lbs) of CO2, Gulfstream
550 has 8,342, followed by Challenger 605 at 6,180. Moreover
, the five other aircrafts
have around 4 to 5 thousand. Correct your spelling
aircraft
Additionally
, the cost of the flight divides
into three categories. There are $6,750 (for Wrong verb form
is divided
Gulfstream
III, Gulfstream
550, and Challenger 605), $4,500 (for Learjet 60, Cessna
Citation XLS, and Hawker
800XP), and $2,700 (for Hawker
400XP, Beechjet 400, and Cessna
CJ II).Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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