The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.
The graph shows the
percentage
of Australian
males
and females who did regular physical activities, spread across 6
age
groups
.
Overall
, the only
age
group
where
males
did more regular exercise when compared to females is between 15 and 24
years
old. For all the other
age
groups
, the
percentage
of a female who did exercise is always higher. Examining the men
first,
between the
age
of 15 to 24
males
do the most exercise, reaching up to 52.8% of the entire male population for that
age
.
However
, in the following
years
, the
percentage
of
males
doing regular exercises continuously dropped. More specifically, from 24 to 34
years
old, the
percentage
dropped to 42.2%, followed by a
further
drop to 39.5% for the 35 to 44
age
group
. From
this
point onwards, the
percentage
experienced small increases, but can never return to its peak at 52.8%.
This
is shown through the increase to 43.1%, 45.1% and 46.7% for the
age
groups
45-54, 55-64 and 65+ respectively. Moving on to women, the
percentage
of females engaging in physical activities has been increasing reliably as people
age
. It started out at 47.7% between the ages of 15 to 24, before overtaking the men in the following
age
group
at 48.9%, rising up to 52.5% for the 35 to 44
age
group
and peaking at 53% between 45 to 54
years
old. The two following
age
groups
saw a slight decrease down to 53 and 47.1% for 55-64 and 65+ respectively.
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