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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.
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The graph shows the
percentage
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 of Australian
males
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 and females who did regular physical activities, spread across 6
age
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groups
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.
Overall
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, the only
age
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group
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 where
males
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 did more regular exercise when compared to females is between 15 and 24
years
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 old. For all the other
age
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groups
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, the
percentage
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 of a female who did exercise is always higher. Examining the men
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between the
age
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 of 15 to 24
males
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 do the most exercise, reaching up to 52.8% of the entire male population for that
age
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.
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, in the following
years
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, the
percentage
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 of
males
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 doing regular exercises continuously dropped. More specifically, from 24 to 34
years
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 old, the
percentage
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 dropped to 42.2%, followed by a
further
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 drop to 39.5% for the 35 to 44
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group
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. From
this
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 point onwards, the
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 experienced small increases, but can never return to its peak at 52.8%.
This
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 is shown through the increase to 43.1%, 45.1% and 46.7% for the
age
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groups
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 45-54, 55-64 and 65+ respectively. Moving on to women, the
percentage
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 of females engaging in physical activities has been increasing reliably as people
age
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. It started out at 47.7% between the ages of 15 to 24, before overtaking the men in the following
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group
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 at 48.9%, rising up to 52.5% for the 35 to 44
age
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group
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 and peaking at 53% between 45 to 54
years
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 old. The two following
age
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groups
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 saw a slight decrease down to 53 and 47.1% for 55-64 and 65+ respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, males, age, groups, group, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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