The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates data about Australian five categories ( skilled vocational
diploma
, undergraduate
diploma
, bachelor's degree, postgraduate
diploma
and masters degree) of after-school qualifications
according to
males and
females
in the year 1999.
Overall
, the highest number of men had in vocational
diploma
,
while
an undergraduate
diploma
was the most famous achievement of
females
in 1999 in Australia.
Firstly
,It can be seen that,
although
nearly 90% of boys preferred to vocational
diploma
, only 10% of girls had that qualification.
However
,
females
reported higher percentages than men only in undergraduate diplomas and bachelor's
degrees
in 1999. So, the undergraduate
diploma
was rated by 70% of
females
which was twice
than
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, and almost 50% of
females
graduated with bachelor's
degrees
.
Secondly
, 30% of female postgraduate
diploma
holders passed out in the provided year, which was double in the male section.
Finally
, 60% of male students had reported they qualified with master's
degrees
and 40% of master's
degrees
were held by the opposite gender in 1999.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • levels
  • post-school qualifications
  • proportion
  • men
  • women
  • held
  • clear gender disparity
  • Certificate I
  • Certificate II
  • Certificate III
  • Certificate IV
  • Diploma or Higher
  • highest proportion
  • decreases
  • overall
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