The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates data about Australian five categories ( skilled vocational
diploma
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, undergraduate
diploma
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, bachelor's degree, postgraduate
diploma
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and masters degree) of after-school qualifications
according to
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males and
females
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in the year 1999.
Overall
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, the highest number of men had in vocational
diploma
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,
while
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an undergraduate
diploma
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was the most famous achievement of
females
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in 1999 in Australia.
Firstly
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,It can be seen that,
although
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nearly 90% of boys preferred to vocational
diploma
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, only 10% of girls had that qualification.
However
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,
females
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reported higher percentages than men only in undergraduate diplomas and bachelor's
degrees
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in 1999. So, the undergraduate
diploma
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was rated by 70% of
females
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which was twice
than
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that
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males
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of males
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, and almost 50% of
females
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graduated with bachelor's
degrees
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.
Secondly
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, 30% of female postgraduate
diploma
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holders passed out in the provided year, which was double in the male section.
Finally
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, 60% of male students had reported they qualified with master's
degrees
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and 40% of master's
degrees
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were held by the opposite gender in 1999.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diploma, females, degrees with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • levels
  • post-school qualifications
  • proportion
  • men
  • women
  • held
  • clear gender disparity
  • Certificate I
  • Certificate II
  • Certificate III
  • Certificate IV
  • Diploma or Higher
  • highest proportion
  • decreases
  • overall
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