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The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on the time and target in the period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on the time and target in the period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the proportion of
men
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 and women who ate five or more portions of
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 per day by seven
age
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groups
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 in the UK in 2006.
Overall
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, in most
age
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groups
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,
men
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 used
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 far more than females, with the seniors in the 55-56
age
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 group tending to eat the most vegetation. It is
also
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 clear that similarities can be seen in the figures for people by 75 and 19-24
age
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groups
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 of both sexes consuming five or more portions of
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 per day. About 35% of the
men
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 in the survey said that they often ate
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 per day, compared to 32% of their female counterparts.
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, the distance percentage of
men
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 and women in the 25-34, 35-44, 45-54 and 65-74
age
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groups
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 chose vegetation were the same, around 3%. Regarding the 19-24 and 75
age
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groups
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, the proportion of people who ate
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 was the same for both genders, with approximately 15% and 25% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, fruit, vegetables, age, groups with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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