The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various catego ries during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each c ategory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an d make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various catego ries during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each c ategory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an d make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
While
the bar chart depicts data on five different sectors for 2015 and 2016, the table provides an accurate per cent
change
in number for all of them from 2015 to 2016.
Overall
, almost all of which, grow larger except one sector. As the graph shows, in 2015 petroleum
products
stood at just over 60 billion dollars
,
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and accounted for the largest part of export earnings and down to the least amount Textiles stood at about 25 billion dollars. For 2016 petroleum
products
experienced a slight increase but a noticeable
change
is the growth of engineered goods that took place above 60 billion dollars
along with
petroleum
products
almost at the same level all other sectors
also
went through a lift except gems and jewellery.
While
it is clear from the table, the
change
in each category from 2015 to 2016 was a substantial increase in textiles that surged by over 15% and
following
this
is engineered goods with 8.5% growth. and down to the least amount of
change
Agricultural
products
took place with less than 1%
change
.
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