Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons such as traditional medicine. How could this be solved?
Humans can perform any task for their own benefit.
Wether
it concerns killing animals for using their parts to decorate their homes or even creating medicinal products from them to an extent till they become endangered. Correct your spelling
Whether
In
strongly oppose Correct your spelling
I
to
the above-stated notion and will explain methods like penalising animal killing and use of genomic sequencing to create medicines to tackle Change preposition
apply
this
concern.
To begin
with, in medieval times humans used animal products for neccessary
needs like meat for food and carcass to protect them from extreme Correct your spelling
necessary
tempratures
. But, in today's Correct your spelling
temperatures
time
things have taken an unexpected turn and these creatures are mercilessly slaughtered for doing business by selling their body parts as souvenirs like elephant tusks and crocodile skin, and Add a comma
time,
also
for making vaccines like antivenoms. For instance
, more than 10,000 tigers were killed for their fur which were
later used in making rugs, in the late 1900's in India which brought them to the verge of extinction.
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This
issue has become an upcoming global concern as animals are linked to the national heritage. Firstly
, penalising animal slaughter and strict action against the law breakers
could help in downsizing the killings to a minimum. Correct your spelling
lawbreakers
For example
, more than a thousand criminals have been arrested till
date who were found trading animal body parts for monetary gains. Change preposition
to
Secondly
, introduction
of new scientific methods like genetic sequencing which uses Add an article
the introduction
human
genome to create vaccines like antivenoms and anticancer drugs, will help in Correct article usage
the human
further
reducing these animal sacrifices.
To conclude
, more and more animals will continue to be killed mercilessly for decorating homes or creating vaccines. It's the government's resposibility
to take prompt and strict action against these delinquents and ban the usage of animal products for making medicines.Correct your spelling
responsibility
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