The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two
map
illustrate the reconstruction of recent industrial Change to a plural noun
maps
area
that Fix the agreement mistake
areas
planned
for Add a missing verb
are planned
the
future Correct article usage
apply
thrievement
. Correct your spelling
improvements
Overall
, in the future industrial area
factory
will be demolished and replaced by housing.
The current industrial Fix the agreement mistake
factories
area
has dominates
Change the verb form
dominated
with
Change preposition
by
factory
along the roundabout it counted in about eight Fix the agreement mistake
factories
factory
at the industrial Change to a plural noun
factories
area
which operate
, Change the verb form
operates
in addition
, in the novel industrial area
there are no public facilities, such
as,
a school.
The prospective industrial Remove the comma
apply
area
planned show the area
will equipped with more public facilities, some of the factory
changes to be housing along the roundabout, notably, the factory
at the recent industrial area
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
locate
at the east changes to a school, Wrong verb form
located
subsequently
, the new feature, Correct word choice
and subsequently
for instance
, the bridge built to cross the river and directly head to the housing quarters, moreover
, the public facilities spread among the housing.
To summarise, planned future development, the industrial area
much
more Add a missing verb
is much
crowd
with housing and Replace the word
crowded
another buildings
.Replace the adjective
another building
other buildings
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, factory with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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