The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two

map

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illustrate the reconstruction of recent industrial

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area

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that

planned

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are planned

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for

the

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apply

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future

thrievement

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improvements

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, in the future industrial

area

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factory

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will be demolished and replaced by housing. The current industrial

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has

dominates

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with

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by

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factory

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factories

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along the roundabout it counted in about eight

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factory

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factories

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at the industrial

area

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which

operate

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,

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, in the novel industrial

area

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there are no public facilities,

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as

,

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a school. The prospective industrial

area

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planned show the

area

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will equipped with more public facilities, some of the

factory

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changes to be housing along the roundabout, notably, the

factory

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at the recent industrial

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that

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locate

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located

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at the east changes to a school,

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subsequently

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and subsequently

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, the new feature,

for instance

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, the bridge built to cross the river and directly head to the housing quarters,

moreover

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, the public facilities spread among the housing. To summarise, planned future development, the industrial

area

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much

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more

crowd

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crowded

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with housing and

another buildings

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another building

other buildings

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