The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two
map
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illustrate the reconstruction of recent industrial
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area
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that
planned
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for
the
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future
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improvements
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, in the future industrial
area
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factory
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will be demolished and replaced by housing. The current industrial
area
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has
dominates
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with
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factory
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along the roundabout it counted in about eight
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factory
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at the industrial
area
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which
operate
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,
in addition
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, in the novel industrial
area
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there are no public facilities,
such
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a school. The prospective industrial
area
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planned show the
area
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will equipped with more public facilities, some of the
factory
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changes to be housing along the roundabout, notably, the
factory
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at the recent industrial
area
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that
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locate
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at the east changes to a school,
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subsequently
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, the new feature,
for instance
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, the bridge built to cross the river and directly head to the housing quarters,
moreover
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, the public facilities spread among the housing. To summarise, planned future development, the industrial
area
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much
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more
crowd
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with housing and
another buildings
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another building
other buildings
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, factory with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • site
  • current
  • proposed
  • expand
  • facilities
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • roads
  • business park
  • airport
  • size
  • layout
  • comparisons
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