You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr. Pavan, I am writing to request some time off for a couple of weeks to complete my Associate Certification. First and foremost, my name is "Adam Smith," and I am currently employed as a quality control engineer on a project titled "ABC Product." I have scheduled the certification exam for "Quality Check Associate" on the 15th of November.

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, I require some time for thorough preparation. Currently, the project has been launched, and

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, all other team members have the capacity to handle any potential issues that may arise. To make up for my absence, I am more than willing to take on additional responsibilities for our upcoming project, and I will be prepared to work extra hours after the completion of my exam.

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certification is not only pivotal for my career but

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vital for our organization. It aids our company in attracting top-tier clients

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the availability of highly qualified resources. Kindly consider

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matter a priority and grant me the necessary permission. I eagerly await your response. Yours sincerely, Adam Smith

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task response

The letter addresses the request for time off and suggests the plan for work if time off is granted. However, the response could be more detailed with specific examples and a clearer connection between the qualification and the job role.

coherence and cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is mostly clear, but there is room for improvement in connecting ideas within and between paragraphs. Additionally, the greeting and closing could be more formal.

lexical resource

The lexical resource is adequate, but there is a need for more varied and sophisticated vocabulary to enhance the formal tone of the letter.

grammatical range

There are some grammatical errors and lack of sentence variety. Improvement in both would enhance the overall quality of writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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