The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below depicts the use of various platforms like
tv
, Correct your spelling
TV
radio
, print, online
for getting information about the current events happening around the world in Canada and Australia. The values are expressed in percentages.
Correct word choice
and online
Overall
, in both nations
more than two-thirds of the population saw Add a comma
nations,
tv
and online news Correct your spelling
TV
whereas
the least proportion of individuals chose radio
and print as an option.
In Canada, around 40 per cent
people
watched the news on Change preposition
of people
tv
, Correct your spelling
TV
following
this
, exactly 4 per cent
less population than the former value got the same information online. Approximately, 14 per cent
individuals
read the printed versions, Change preposition
of individuals
while
only 7 per cent
listened
it on the Add the preposition
listened to
radio
.
More than 50 per cent
persons
educated themselves by the online portal in Australia. Change preposition
of persons
After
this
, about 37 per cent
saw the news on tv
, Correct your spelling
TV
while
only 2 and 7 per cent
of them got the knowledge from radio
and print version
, respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
versions
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