The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration below depicts the use of various platforms like

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radio

, print,

online

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and online

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for getting information about the current events happening around the world in Canada and Australia. The values are expressed in percentages.

Overall

, in both

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nations,

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more than two-thirds of the population saw

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and online news

whereas

the least proportion of individuals chose

radio

and print as an option. In Canada, around 40 per

cent

people

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of people

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watched the news on

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following

this

, exactly 4 per

cent

less population than the former value got the same information online. Approximately, 14 per

cent

individuals

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of individuals

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read the printed versions,

while

only 7 per

cent

listened

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it on the

radio

. More than 50 per

cent

persons

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educated themselves by the online portal in Australia.

After

this

, about 37 per

cent

saw the news on

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while

only 2 and 7 per

cent

of them got the knowledge from

radio

and print

version

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, respectively.

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3Word repetition
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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?

in some culture the parents arrange marriage for their children but in others people choose their own marriage partner. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each system?

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