Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
There is no denying the fact that how do
people
plan for their life.
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While
it is a commonly held belief that people
should do the same things without changes, there is also
an argument that they should change their things. This
essay will discuss this
topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
On one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
people
do the same tasks that will increase their concentration and comfortable
. Replace the word
comfort
In other words
, doing the same things everyday
Replace the word
every day
make
it easy to have high-quality work and enough Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
experiance
. Correct your spelling
experience
In addition
, that may help you saving
your time Change the form of the verb
save
instead
of constantly changes
. Wrong verb form
changing
For example
, busnissmen
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businessmen
are working
Wrong verb form
work
along
the year, and create their own schedule at the beginning of the year without any future changes.
On Change preposition
throughout
other
hand, change plays a crucial role in our lives which will make us Correct article usage
the other
having
good feelings and be energetic. It is Wrong verb form
have
also
possible to say that, routen
schedules tend us Correct your spelling
routine
route
doing
our tasks Wrong verb form
do
in
Change preposition
apply
dull
and Change the word
dully
depression
. Replace the word
depressed
Moreover
, engaged
some activities in our plans will help us to be motivated and engaged. Wrong verb form
engaging in
For instance
, many people
having
activities at weekends in terms of changing and breaking the routine.
In conclusion, there are no easy answers to Wrong verb form
have
this
question. On balance, however
, I tend to believe that we should have many activities in our lives that will lead us having
good feelings and be comfortable to do other tasks.Change the verb form
to have
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.
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