imports electronic goods in million The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts information on the
number
of imported electronic items between 2000 and 2006.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
during a given period, the most imported units were Linking Words
televisions
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of DVD Use synonyms
players
, Use synonyms
televisions
and radios exhibited an upward trend, the Use synonyms
number
of CD Use synonyms
players
and video recorders experienced a downward trajectory.
In 2000, the Use synonyms
number
of imported DVD Use synonyms
players
stood at 3 Use synonyms
million
which Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
ascended
nearly twofold in the next six years. Verb problem
increased
Likewise
, there was a noticeable rise in radios, rising from 4 Linking Words
million
to 5.2 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
while
CD Linking Words
players
which stood at 2.1 Use synonyms
million
experienced a Use synonyms
slightly
decrease to 1.7 Change the adverb
slight
million
.
Regarding the Use synonyms
televisions
and video recorders, in the initial year, both Use synonyms
of
items were in the same proportion, accounting for 6.2 Change preposition
apply
million
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, in the subsequent years (2006), the Linking Words
number
of imported Use synonyms
televisions
shot up to nearly a third Use synonyms
while
video recorders Linking Words
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
more
than a halved.Change preposition
by more
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, televisions, players, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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